The Official Writing Challenge
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04/18/08
This is heartfelt, wonderfully descriptive, and so lovely and sincere. You tugged at my heartstrings. Thank you for sharing this.
A lovely and moving tribute to your father. A couple of missing commas, but easily fixed. I love the way you relate the memories of childhood and your father's love for you. Well done!
04/21/08
Heartfelt, touching, a little attention to details, perhaps a buddy edit will take your writing a long way. Thanks for sharing this story.