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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: Easter (05/30/05)
Every year little Children celebrate Easter. They might not even know what it is. All they know is that they will get a basket filled with artificial grass and chocolate bunnies and colorful eggs. I haved always had a question in my mind growing up; Where does the bunny play apart in Easter? We all know that bunnies don't lay eggs. Maybe the artificial grass stands for the deceitful things in this world. The realty in Easter is that there is someone who gave his son to die on the cross for us all and on the third day he rose again. This man had no sin but became a sin when he entered our trial with God. We all know what the outcome was going to be "GUILTY". But he loves us so much that he paid the debt that we owed to God. Jesus laid his life down for us. We ought to do the same for him. Lay down your Life and pick up your cross and walk. On Easter our children should not have the memories of; how many colorful eggs they found or what kind of candy was in their baskets. We should tell them the truth. That Easter stands for the blood of Jesus and his resurrection. Every egg should be colored RED because red was the color that ran down his face when he died. Each year on Easter please let your children know the truth and The truth shall set you free.
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Lynda Lee Schab 
06/08/05
You share some good thoughts. It seems you were writing a sort of journal entry. There were a few spelling and grammatical errors nd the piece could have been expanded to more. But maybe that didn't interest you. Thanks for sharing your thoughts.
Blessings, Lynda
dub W
06/08/05
You are on the right track, but as noted above, have your work looked at by a friend before posting, that way many of the glitches will disappear.
LINDA GERMAIN 
06/09/05
Agree with above. You definitely have the basis for some excellent teaching, just may need a little read through before posting. You are on the right road. Don't stop! :0)
Shari Armstrong 
06/10/05
I liked the comparrsion of the fake grass to the world. Expand on those kind of comparrisons and it'd be an even better piece :)