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I enjoyed spying on this precious visit between grandfather and granddaughter. His example of commitment is a wonderful legacy.
This reminded me a lot of my Grandma and Grandpa. She had a stroke, and my grandpa took care of her until she died. He loved her a lot.

You painted a great picture of a wonderful relationship between a grandfather and granddaughter. Thank you for sharing this. I really enjoyed it. :)
What a lovely story of love and commitment and the role and example grandparents can have in the lives of their grandchildren.

Well done.
Such loyalty is sadly rare now. The start to their marriage seems to have been the start to a good one.
So sweet. I enjoyed the voice of the grandpa especially.
This was very good. Having grandparents in a nursing home, you did a great job describing the atmosphere of the place. Loved the way the characters were weaved in.
Congratulations, Amanda, on placing 8th in your level with this piece. Great work!