The Official Writing Challenge
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I'm so glad Mark got his priorities right. I liked the way you showed Sally's frustration and disappointment. Kids are with for such a short amount of time. Well done, your message is very good.
03/14/08
The message here was perfectly on topic. Great job.
03/16/08
Very good story. This is an important concept to many of our husbands and fathers. Thank you for sharing.
Laury