The Official Writing Challenge
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03/14/08
Yes...we should enjoy life as we live it, not always wishing we were young again.
I'm not sure how the title fits. Also, try to use more natural words, such as you would speak, maybe even include dialogue here and there.
I like the part of you dreaming to live in the Congo like Tarzan.
This had a good message. Thank you for writing this.
Oh, this brought back so many childhood memories... "making homemade bows and arrows, trekking through the bushes in search of adventure, climbing trees and lying on a gently swaying branch for hours watching the sun set" What a great thing to pass on to children (in my case grandchildren now). Making the most of every day while we can. Enjoying everything God gives us to the full. Well done, I really enjoyed your story.