The Official Writing Challenge
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03/08/08
This is a wonderful story. It would help the reader if you put an extra space between paragraphs.
Keep writing.
03/10/08
What an inspiring story!

Here's a quick note about semicolons: every thing that comes before the semicolon and everything that comes after it must be able to stand alone as a complete sentence. They are used to join two independent (but related) clauses.

Every story of heartbreak should end with such joyous redemption.
I love how you ended your story... very encouraging! Definitely hit the topic!