The Official Writing Challenge
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03/09/08
How sweet.. This was a cute story. I especially like his scripture pep talk to himself.
Good job
03/10/08
Children can be so sensitive about what their parents need, can't they?

I'm a bit nervous about your use of the painted black cloud; it may be too literally like this week's proverb.

A sweet story with some good depiction of emotions: stress, relief, etc. Well done.
03/10/08
Very nice story and you used my favorite Bible verse, too. Kids can be very insightful when we actually listen to them! Thanks for sharing!
Laury
Encouraged by his wife, daughter, and God all at once! Very cool! Nice story... keep writing.