The Official Writing Challenge
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Nicely written. I enjoyed it.
05/31/05
This is a well written peice. It flows beautifully from beginning to end. I also like the way you interpreted the theme of 'Birthday'. I'm just wondering why it isn't in the advanced level.
06/03/05
You had me smiling from the beginning, which only grew as I read further. Brought back memories of my most loved books that I'd get off my Dad's shelf that had that wonderful old book smell! Agree with the other comment -this is NOT a beginner work :) Loved it!
I guessed that book was the Hobbit! LOL Well done! I liked it. :-)