The Official Writing Challenge
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I also love the first verse. And the whole thing captures well the battle we all fight to overcome. God bless you.
01/25/05
I loved the last verse best. It sounds like Jesus - and that's what we should desire - to be like Jesus. Some of the poem's rhythm seemed abrupt, but I loved the thoughts you expressed.