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02/21/08
A very unique take on this topic! I never would have thought of it.

Here's a thought--you have Christians immediately after the Resurrection--but were they called "Christians" at that point? I could be wrong...

I like your title, and your originality.
Great story! Good job. :)
02/21/08
Eerie! It was an interesting group of "people".
Right on topic, and with a wonderful ending.
Very nicely done. Yes, that is the penacle of cutting off one's nose...
Jan has a great eye for detail, and is correct that they were not called Christians for many years after the resurrection.
02/22/08
With writing like this, you won't be in beginners very long. Great job!
Interesting take on a Bible truth. Keep writing.
I love unique takes on stories and events from The Bible. You did a good job. The story was very imaginative and fit the topic.
02/24/08
Very imaginative...I could really feel the hatred in that room!
02/25/08
Creative recapture from the Bible events! Jan does has a great eye for detail.
Acts 11:26
("It was there at Antioch that the believers were first called "Christians.")
TLB

Enjoy your gift and Keep in the Writing Lane. : ) God bless, Helen
02/25/08
I too like you story - good luck and keep writing.
02/27/08
I enjoyed this...you did a very nice job! A few punctuation misses, but all in all? Great job! Keep writing!