The Official Writing Challenge
This article has been read 763 times
Member Comments
Member
Date
02/15/08
Wow! This was wonderful! I really liked reading this. You made me laugh outloud and feel sorry for you at the same time. Great writing! Keep up the good work!
Laury
02/15/08
Excellent story! I was glued to it right to the end. I laughed at some of the points I read. The great message here is loving God enough to work through all that chaos and go to church with the kids anyway!
Keep it up your writing is good.
02/16/08
Wonderful story! Getting 5 youngsters ready and at church on time is a witness to many - The Lord will reward your faithfulness! Thanks for sharing. God Bless :)
Great details to involve your readers. Nice job. :)
Great story. You captured the insanity that a single mother with five children would go through. I don't know if you will lose points for mentioning "spilt milk." Hopefully not, because this is real good.
10/31/08
I was wanting to write a story to make people feel sorry for me, thank you for showing me how!!!!!