The Official Writing Challenge
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Lovely!
01/25/08
A poem! I like the message.
The rhythm and rhyme pattern started out well... then it went into a freestyle. Was that intentional? Poetry is is like building a stone wall. You need to look at each stone or word, evaluate it's size and if it fits.
Good job...keep writing.
Very touching! I really enjoyed it. Keep on writing!