The Official Writing Challenge
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12/07/07
Thank you for sharing this testimony--how wonderful!

I'd recommend that you re-think your opening sentence; it's a good idea to avoid well-known expressions and go for something fresh and original...is the some other metaphor that would express your reluctance to go to church?

It was great that the group leader decided to do Q and A rather than a heavy Bible study on that occasion.
I like your easy conversational style of writing. You bring out good points on how a home group can be a positive place, even if church sometimes isn't. Nice job.