The Official Writing Challenge
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11/30/07
You pulled it all together with the last line. Great twist!
11/30/07
EXTREMELY clever, and very well-written. And I learned a new word: squamata!

My only concern is that it may be light on the topic of "gifts."

But I really, really loved this.
12/03/07
Clever writing! Very cute story with a lot of great descriptions. Love the ending!
12/03/07
Ooooh - CUTE! So creative and fun - and I LOVE LOVE LOVE the last line. Also concerned about topic, but SO fun!