The Official Writing Challenge
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12/01/07
I like your repetition of the phrase "let us...".

I will be easier to read your entries if you put a blank space between paragraphs.

This was inspiring and thought-provoking.
12/02/07
I can so feel your passion for this - you wrapped me up in it as well.

Breaking this up into smaller paragraphs might improve readability.

A well-written wakeup call. Thanks for sharing it!