The Official Writing Challenge
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11/23/07
The title and story are really good, if a bit short. But I cannot work out whether the Narrator was helped by God or the pastor. I think it was God but if so, you have used He as a bit interchangeable between them.
11/25/07
I like how you write, very conversational. That's my style, too. Don't be scared to keep on writing. You have much to share so use up those 750 words!
Laury