The Official Writing Challenge
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11/17/07
There are vivid descriptions in this piece. I could easily picture the scene.
This gave me a warm fuzzy feeling. What a sweet scene between father and daughter. I loved the description with chocolate fingerprints on the doorknob. Excellent writing! ^_^
11/20/07
Sweet and tender writing! I loved your descriptions of the little girl. Your title is perfect. Keep writing!