The Official Writing Challenge
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11/17/07
You have a lot of enthusiasm for this topic. Adding an extra return between each paragraph will make it easier to read. Keep writing.
This is a good article. Some italics for the first sentence-showing the adj. would have worked nicely, but this was well put. My only tips-be careful with using too many "!" and add some extra spaces between paragraphs to make for easier reading.