The Official Writing Challenge
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Very introspective. Unique approach to the topic. Especially liked the line, "Nudge it gently....to focus direction."
11/14/07
OOOhhh, I loved the imagery in this piece. While I appreciated the uniqueness of this and I get the connection, I think it needed a little more substance to tie it firmly to the topic. Lovely piece.