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Great story. Thanks for sharing it.
Great testimony of God's working in your life-I assume it's your testimony. I can almost see myself there and feel the holiness of the moment.
Very vivid descriptions and a wonderful testimony. Well written and captivating.
Your story touched my heart and I thought you communicated very well how deeply the 'play' touched your heart also. Great piece.
This was so moving. It is just like that when you are trying to get into character for a role. If you're good at acting anyway. I can only imagine how that must have affected you. Well, I don't even have to imagine since you did such a good job of describing it. Would you consider changing the "higher power" to one of the other descriptions of Jesus if you ever publish this elsewhere? Not necessary, just a little suggestion since I live right in the middle of a bunch of new age churches. I know what you meant, though. REALLY beautiful piece.
You did an excellent job of setting the scene on this.