The Official Writing Challenge
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10/26/07
Loved the ending on this piece. I could picture the scene well. Good work.
I hope this is true. I love the symbolism of the wave covering your MC. Well done.
I love the ending, with the wave baptizing her.
10/30/07
I could feel the dilemma in the beginning. The ending gave me a wave of chill bumps covering my arms....
Well done.
I am so in the same delima. Just spoke to pastor Sunday and he said we should redo out first works. I'll be the first in line the next baptism we preform at church. Great piece, I could really sense your excitement, gave me goose-bumps! Thanks for sharing.
So well written it was as though I was there! I felt that this was an experience for me as much as a reading. Well communicated...keep writing, God is using you!