The Official Writing Challenge
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10/19/07
"Fellowship with believers,
Is a very important thing,
It provides encouragement, and hope,
To anyone in need."

SO true!!!!
10/20/07
Your message is certainly communicated here!

To add extra sparkle to your poetry, use poetic elements like imagery or metaphor. It will make them stand out from other similar poems.
I love how you tell a story in such short little burts of words! Wonderfully done. Be Blessed!
10/24/07
This is very nice and very true. I have to wonder why you named the man "Bran" but I enjoyed the poem anyway!