The Official Writing Challenge
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05/11/05
You tell a good story. It was vividly told and I liked how you expressed the faith in a mother's love. A small suggestion is, less commas, and's, & more complete sentences. "God Bless You Too"
I think that we often forget that it doesn't matter what our child does, we do not have to approve and can even be deeply hurt and ashamed by their actions, but always, still, we love them so much which is why it hurts so much.

You reminded us of this in this story and left us with something to remember.