The Official Writing Challenge
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09/09/07
The best part of this is the story of Cashew--I wonder if you might give this piece a bit of a "makeover" and concentrate on that section, perhaps making a story out of it? It's a great object lesson!
09/09/07
This is good. I like how you focused on Peter's faith and boldness rather than his lack of faith towards the end.

I would have picked one of these stories and focused on it. Make it your own. Add your own flavor to it rather than just telling us what the Bible says. I'd also recommend leaving and extra line of space between paragraphs. It makes it easier on the eyes. :)

I liked hit a lot. Good job. Keep writing.
09/13/07
It's amazing how much the Bible has to say or show about boldness. The stories you've picked are great examples. You have some good thoughts in your devotional writing. Thanks!