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08/30/07
I loved what you wrote. You made it clear that being fearful is not a reason to step out in faith. Thank you for the reminder.
08/31/07
I was completely hooked by the title, and it clearly showed the theme of a battle between faith and fear. I also liked the way that it loops at the end of the story, to show that this never ends. But I was wondering whether you could tell what the experience was that convinced you.
09/02/07
What an awesome experience. Smuggling Bibles is very tough work.

Remember to capitalize Bible all the time (I get this same reminder from my crit partners.;)). Also, you may want to consider a different format. It seemed a bit disjointed the way is was.

Great job.
Outstanding. Thanks for sharing this tidbit of yourself with us readers! Great writing.
09/04/07
Eye-catching title. Appreciated the honesty and the true courage (i.e. that which overcomes fear) you showed. God seems to use us the most in our weakness. Good real life lessons here.
I had to smile at the "inner insurance" though - unless it was intentional. Maybe there is such a thing?