The Official Writing Challenge
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08/24/07
Excellent lesson - I especially liked your very last line.

There are a few grammar and punctuation issues that, if polished, could make this an easier read. I'd also recommend not starting a story with a definition - there are definitely more interesting ways to grab your reader.

This was very convicting and interesting. Keep writing!
08/28/07
This is a great message we all need to remember. Nice work, keep writing!