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Topic: Embarrassed (07/19/07)
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TITLE: embarrassed (i) | Previous Challenge Entry
By waco brock
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knowing all the times that i failed his test and gave into the flesh that should be dead
many times in life i have missed the mark but he still loves me and he will forgive
if i go to him in true repentance daily for his will i do try to live
when i stand before his awesome holy throne i pray lukewarm never will be felt
he says that he would rather it hot or cold the lukewarm spewed is how he has delt
i pray he empowers me to live my life to be pleasing in his holy sight
that he takes my shortcomings and my failures he turns them around to make them right
me giving honor to the heavenly father trustingthrough the blood from his son
as i meet face to face with jesus christ i pray the words i hear will be well done
i would hate to be embarrassed and have not a single crown to lay at his feet
after the horrendous suffering for me him empty handed i now would greet
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Just a tip-Capitalize your "i" when just using "I" and add some spaces in between for easier reading. Don't forget to captalize the first letter of a word in a new sentence and add puncuation like, question marks, etc. This is good, it has a lot of potential!
If you could use spaces between your paragraphs, it would be easier to read.
I hope you keep writing.