The Official Writing Challenge
This article has been read 563 times
Member Comments
Once we travel outside of the US, we can never again remain ignorant to what the rest of the world endures and the sacrifices many will make to have a better life. Good points in your story.
I would like to know the setting of this story. You did a good job of producing an "academic" voice throughout. The ending was not what I expected, but I liked that the relationship was renewed.