The Official Writing Challenge
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07/21/07
This is lovely - with a wonderful lesson (or two or three!) for the reader.

Putting spaces between your paragraphs would make this a bit easier on the eyes.

Thanks so much for sharing this!
What lovely thoughts you have written here! I really enjoyed the portrayal of joy and happiness as sisters. Your final sentence summed it up beautifully.
07/25/07
Great opening line. Very vivid descriptions throughout:) You are a colorful writer. This came to a good conclusion and all in all - very nice writing!