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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: Christmas (04/25/05)
Christmas Redemption

Christmas comes to cheer us up,
Holy sighs of joy and happiness
Ringing in the birth of our Jesus!
Inside the poor manger He lay,
Submitting to the will of the Father,
This miracle came to redeem us all!
My Saviour, my Christ,innocent and pure,
At the throne of the Lord, my Maker,
Saves my soul for all eternity!
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donna robinson
05/02/05
sometimes we can say the most important message in just a few lines like you did here.
Pekola Roberts
05/03/05
Excellent article. Only one typo. You present a wonderful gift in a small package. Thanks for a work well done. Look forward to readings from you in the future.
P.K.
karen McLamb
05/05/05
Wow! very short put to the point!
enjoy your writing much,keep up the good work.
Deborah Porter 
05/09/05
Keith, I agree that you summed Christmas up in a neat little bundle. Unfortunately, it was just a little too small for the Writing Challenge and, at just 59 words, it had to be disqualified. I hope you'll keep entering the Challenge in the future, but just keep the word count limits in mind - 150 words minimum and 750 words maximum. Don't feel bad about making the mistake - there are always several every week who miss the guidelines, and there probably always will be. If you want your poem to remain short, just add some opening or closing paragraphs to bring it up to the limit (preferrably not just Scripture). With love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)