The Official Writing Challenge
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05/03/07
Lots of good motivation here--I wish I could get my student (mostly high school seniors) to believe this!

Try to avoid familiar phrases--you've used "you are the future" and "wind beneath your wings" and several others that people may tend to gloss over. A topic like this needs fresh ways of expression.

I can just see parts of this on one of those inspirational posters with gorgeous nature photography...very lovely.