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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: Write an INSPIRATIONAL or DEVOTIONAL piece (04/26/07)
The old lady that I once knew would give me a big hug whenever I was blue. We sometimes kneel and prayed a prayer or two, for those homeless people whom we seldom knew. We laughed at the commercials, ones that seem funny at the time, and we often talk about problems, which comes across our minds. We give thanks to God for everyday that we’ve shared, and we appreciate the warm embrace of those of you that cared. Were struggling through the rough road one which is hard to walk upon, but we must do as Jesus did, and oh yes it has been done. The old lady I speak about was very good to me. She made me look at things that I didn’t want to see. She made me look at the world from the good side and the bad. She told me I had two choices, ones I knew I had. The old lady says weigh your answers very closely and the truth will come out. There will then be a lot to rejoice and sing about.
Sing because your happy and you made the right choice. Lift up your hands as well as your voice. Be proud that your decision put you on the right track, and knowing God’s words will never set you back. It will only give you wisdom in knowing how to act. My child for you to learn, your big part, you learn it by following your heart. The old lady last word was I’m very proud of you, because you allowed Jesus to carry you through.
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Jan Ackerson
05/06/07
How blessed you were to have this lady in your life!

I was a little bit confused by the format of this piece. It's laid out like prose, but it's got rhyme and rhythm, like poetry. Perhaps you had problems formatting it? Feel free to e-mail me for some formatting tips.