The Official Writing Challenge
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I thought you did an excellent job of telling the story. Of giving this piece the human voice of regret. What a witness piece to remind us we have to step away from our anger, go back to the beginning and ask God to heal us---again...
04/29/05
A very true slice of life and a good example of what God will do if we give Him a chance.
A nice write and lesson for us all...when we can admit we've been wrong and ask our Savior for HIS forgiveness, maturity blooms and He will help us continue to grow. I enjoyed this and at this time in my life, I can sure relate to it.
I liked this. Very real.Often we *do* need to retreat even if it's into a bathroom stall. Nicely written, I enjoyed reading it.
The peace of God that passeth all understanding is examplified so beautifully in your story. Good Job!