The Official Writing Challenge
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03/02/07
I like the flow and "pattern" of your writing. I'm not a semstrist (sp?) but you presented your material well enough for this dumb guy to follow. Good job.
I liked your conclusion. It was different from what I thought it would be - a wise teacher who recognized a time to praise (it worked) and a guiding mother who was there even during the not-so-best times. God bless. Keep writing.
We can all look back on times when we thought we were on top of the world, until we realized it just looked that way because of our height. It's the same way with our spiritual height. We think we're on top until we look back and realize we're still climbing. Good article.