The Official Writing Challenge
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I really love thiis article,however pay attention to punctuation. It reveals to me how God knows whom we are destined with Thanks.
A good love story. However, in the first paragraph you switch from I to she. It needs to be one or the other. Since you carry I throughout the rest of the story, I would say change the wording to I. However, there's a very good story here.
03/03/07
What a wonderful story! It flows well and kept me interested. Just take a little more time to proofread.