The Official Writing Challenge
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Good story. I do feel that the last line could be eliminated. It seems "tossed" in there as an afterthought. The rest of the article is great without it.
03/08/07
An uplifting story about faith and trust. When we are weak, He is strong. I agree that the last sentence should be omitted. It really serves no point. Thank you for the great reminder that "I can do all things through Christ who strengthens me." Keep writing!