The Official Writing Challenge
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02/23/07
The verse you mentioned is probably one of my favorites. But then, I love almost all verses from the Psalms.

This seemed to end a bit abruptly. I would add some more details and expand on this a bit.

I also love the mountains. It made me miss them a bit. Missouri doesn't have any "real" mountains.
I could feel myself walking through the mountains with you. There were several spelling and other errors here however. Maybe it would help to let the article lay aside for awhile, then read it again and you might just see some of the errors before you submit. (It's too late after!)Keep writing.
02/25/07
You capture the serenity of the mountains well.
02/25/07
Lovely! I could feel the serenity in the setting and I envied the narrator her peace of mind. Very well done
02/26/07
You definitely captured the peace you experienced very well. I agree with wanting more - expand your description some more maybe? Thanks for sharing!
02/26/07
A lovely devotional--I can visualize every step.

A few minor errors in grammar and punctuation, easily edited.

Expand your writing--it's very pleasant to read.