The Official Writing Challenge
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02/15/07
I really enjoyed reading this--I could relate to the narrator's frustration with arts and crafts, since I've never been good at or enjoyed those either. Great message, and I appreciate the sharing!
I liked the last paragraph best. It sums it all up.
02/21/07
This was very nice and I especially enjoyed the last paragraph. Good work
I don't think, at least so far, that you received enough praise for this piece. We all know the best gifts come in small packages but sometimes they are overlooked. Perhaps I can be the good angel between your last critique and the next. Very, very nice!