The Official Writing Challenge
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02/17/07
I like you tied "craft" in at the very end again. I was wondering how well it fit the topic at first, but you brought it together at the end.

There were a few minor errors, but nothing major. Watch out for numbers. Anything under 100 should be spelled out.

There was a great message in this story, and I enjoyed reading it. Keep writing!