The Official Writing Challenge
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02/17/07
This story was so intense! It kept me on the edge of my seat! I had trouble keeping track of who was speaking in a place or two. Overall, a great entry. Keep writing.
02/21/07
Interesting story! It reminded me that not everything man handcrafts is a good thing! I noticed some problems with using quotation marks, but overall it was a good piece.