The Official Writing Challenge
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I loved this. Takes me back to my first art piece and the message is good. Good writing.
Great story! Perfect verse to end with!
02/16/07
"When God made us it wasn’t His goal to have us sit on a shelf." What a powerful line. Thanks for the reminder
Thank you for a good narrative, well told. For me it was a reminder that it is not so much the small offerings that we bring to God as it is the heart with which we offer and the heart with which He receives.
02/18/07
This is very well-written, with a sweet, nostalgic feel. Perhaps it loses focus a bit when you get to the devotional bit, but the scripture ties it all together and finishes it off very nicely. Good job!
02/19/07
I loved the comment "A mother's pride knows no end". I could see the ugly paperweight in my mind. It made me chuckle! I also loved the way you turned this into a devotional in which we are pitchers made to carry living water - not sit on a shelf. These are good thoughts and the writing here is a nice quality.
02/22/07
Very nice story! Loved the ending and it was a very enjoyable read. Nice work