The Official Writing Challenge
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02/08/07
A couple of small problems in the 2nd to last par; but a good last line and a great connection in the middle of the two examples. I liked it.
Good thought.
02/10/07
This is a nice combination of story/anecdote & inspiration.
02/10/07
This is a nice combination of story/anecdote & inspiration.
The title caught my eye. This was pretty interesting to read!
I relly like the comparisons. Very nicely written. I can relate to this. God bless. Janice