The Official Writing Challenge
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01/26/07
Ah, yes... I've had many of those masterpiecs on my walls and had other items in my home "fixed" by my little ones. The thoughts are so appreciated, and you captured this mom's mixed emotions very well. Good work
01/31/07
A sweet story intertwined with wit, and a mother that handled the problem well, I thought. Creative, and written well. Thanks for sharing this "messy" masterpiece with us. Delightful!
This story made me smile! Congratulations! I loved how you connected it all together in the end. Good writing.
02/02/07
Loved your story, Eden, the circumstances are so typical and the underlying truth so clear. The story flows well with no ackward transistions or explainations. Good work!
~emma
02/04/07
An easy read! Easy to relate to! Easy to enjoy! What a challenging & transparent piece! It makes me want to look for more of your work!