The Official Writing Challenge
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01/20/07
Great story explaining your main character's despair. Just space out your paragraphs a bit. It's easier to read. Thanks for sharing.
01/20/07
Oooh, the ending gave me chills, returning as it did to the title, and bringing an aha! moment of realization.
Very powerful writing here. I liked this piece very much.
01/25/07
I, too, very much enjoyed this piece! You did a good job in portraying the despair and discouragement of the woman. I really liked the hopeful way you ended the story, as well! Thank you for sharing this!