The Official Writing Challenge
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What a sweet story! I loved how you told it from the grandma's POV. Some missing punctuation-just minor stuff, overall a great read!
01/12/07
What a sweet reminiscence with such a wonderful atmosphere. I truly enjoyed this!
01/17/07
I like this. You do very well with dialogue and description. You'll be moving up a level soon, I'm sure. Made me want to treasure my times with my little girls. They are growing too fast!