The Official Writing Challenge
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12/15/06
This is a very touching story that honors all the brave soldiers who have acted as medics on battlefields in every war.

My favorite line was the one where the grandfather is described as transporting the wounded man "as if carrying a huge bucket of gold nuggets and not wanting to spill a single one." It gave me a clear sense of his care and dedication to those he served.

Thank you for sharing this story!
12/15/06
What a nice memory of a brave soldier. How precious their sharing was. A touching story and you tell it well. Keep writing!
12/17/06
This is a special story; the realistic description, although abreviated and the clarity of the meaning was well done. Thank you.
12/19/06
Well done. Made me a bit teary at the end.
12/21/06
Loved this story! So glad that you received a due reward for your penning of this terrific story. Kudos!
12/21/06
Congratulations! A very touching story and a precious moment in the life of a special little child. Good work!
12/21/06
That was beautiful!