The Official Writing Challenge
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This made me smile through the whole story. This is so very enjoyable. I love the concept and the story. Well done!
This was a brilliant read!! Loved it throughout - and so creative, entertaining and with a moral attached; I'm surprised there aren't more Comments on this one!! Congratulations for placing! Well deserved! Kudos!
Congratulations on your win! What a creative entry. I loved the light voice you gave the angels. The shooting up out of the earth's atmosphere scene was great. Good work.
I enjoyed it. And I too smiled through it. What a neat thought.
Good work! I liked that you were able to capture that little slice of life in so few words.

Lisa Dublin
I think this is a great story. It makes me smile as I read it. Keep up with the good work. I like the way in which you describe the angels.