The Official Writing Challenge
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12/17/06
A very nice tribute to two special fathers. You made me see them clearly. Nicely done.
12/19/06
I liked your style of writing - you used description but now too heavily and it flowed well. I liked the contrast between the two fathers - the ending sort of came on quickly...I might develop that a bit more - you write well and I can see you have definite talent!:) Great job!