The Official Writing Challenge
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Pretty good. Some grammatical errors. It was kind of sad that Anita didn't see what her sister did in 'volunteering'. But why did you end it so soon? I was expecting more! Otherwise-good job :)
I really enjoyed your dialog. I could picture things so well. But I sure would have liked it to go longer!
An interesting exchange between the two sisters. I enjoyed the dialog also and could easily picture the scene. Good job.