The Official Writing Challenge
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Okay then.... You really got me there with the end. You kept my attention from the beginning to the end.
Congratulations with a impressive piece of work.
This is really, really good. I loved the writing style, loved the humour, loved the message - nothing I didn't love, in fact. Shouldn't be in beginners. I hope this does well.
This is so clever and fun and thoughtprovoking! The beginning part was just SO fun and amusing, and the end so profound. Wonderful job!
Excellent! I agree with the other posters. I smiled at the beginning and loved the ending. Very well done!
My mouth literally dropped open when I saw the last word.
I had to go back and read it again from that perspective. One (very minor) unneeded apostophre.
Awesome! Awesome!
Loved this! Very good read, excellent job!
very funny at the beginning and so touching at the end.